Please Critique my UNC essay.. thanks*

insntynonchalan
Tue, 16 Nov 2004 18:44:50 +0000

My schedule of Honors and AP classes, while challenging me intellectually and providing me with lessons to bring to college with me, have never exposed me to as varied lifestyles as this sociology class.

watch your subject verb agreement. your verb should be has, because your subject is My schedule…i.e., My schedule has, not my AP and honors classes have…