Please Grade My Essay #2

paying3tuitions
Sun, 25 Feb 2007 21:46:13 +0000

hey, if anyone’s reading this who wants to know how to improve, go back and read lin’s threads. Compare this to his last essay (ouch) but you’ll see why this one’s a 12 and the others weren’t.

(Sorry, lin, holding you up for an example like that…but it’s a positive example!)