Please grade my essay =D

Pennaspirant
Tue, 29 Jul 2008 09:26:07 +0000

seriously it’s tooo short. you should also address the second part of the question more clearly. and like everyone else has said, more examples. the diction doesn’t count much for your score. fairly sophisticated would be fine; there is no need to sound overly academic. i think your style and all that is okay. but do add in some nice phrases here and there if you could. however i must emphasise your standard is fine. do save some time to edit your essay at the end.

i’ll give it a 7/8. but i am horrible at grading, so just take my comments, haha.