please grade my essay

Khairi
Wed, 04 Jan 2012 04:12:26 +0000

Everyone was bon to be creative,Everyone was given a box of crayons in kindergarden.Ironically,Everyone is turning to being rather practical.A shift which has led to the deterioration of the earth and eventually the erase of the planet.Global warming,Scout’s character,and Newton’s calimed inability show the physical impact of being creative.

After the Industrial Revolution,the world has come to be a running train in which every carcass need fetch a place.Industries were mechanized,conformity was acclaimed,and platitude was favored.Everyone started to think conformily of his/her own desire.To the utmost exploit of the universe.Eventually,the world became a garve,a dim place to live.The reason,exclusively,was global warming.A procedure which,due to the increase of toxic gases such as carbon dioxide and sulfuric acid,prevents the gases from escaping the ozone layer but,least,it also leads to a hole making in the ozone increasing the Ultraviolet radiation.A cause of an increase in death rates worldwide.Although it may be solved by mediation and creative insight,who,the non-conformist-will ever by the one to act an atrocity.

In literature,as in current events,we see the manifest use of conformity.In "To KIll a Mockingbird,Scout,a first grader,is blamed by her teacher of being creative in reading outside school.To scout’s shock,she realizes the inertia of versatile minds.


Lastly,Newton,at school,was thought of as a non-efficent student.Not following conformity,he was assigned stuidity.However,after his rigorously criticizing years,Newton’s creativity proclaimed the question of gravity,ultimately leading to sequels of acclaim and immortality.

In a nutshell,I do agree that we need creativity more than ever nowadays.We need answers that surely wont be answered without contemplation.We need an answer to the deteriorating earth and to the criticism assigned to Newton,Scout,and oreover to come.


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