Please Grade My Essay

Woandering
Sat, 22 Nov 2014 21:26:13 +0000

@Hypocrit Is this for the SAT? This is bit of an unusual prompt for SAT. I don’t think you would ever get this prompt on the actual test because it is rather controversial, and most people have strong views.

Your examples are very weak. You need to find historical or literary examples. Unless you’re a history geek, this would be extremely hard for this prompt.

At this point, I would suggest you try another prompt. If you’d still like me to grade this one, then tag me again.