Please Grade my SAT Essay - No. 3

jkjeremy
Thu, 09 Jan 2014 23:09:45 +0000

You haven’t told me how these technological advances have diminished the quality of our lives.

What, for example, is so bad about working more hours?

This essay is very heavy on fact and quite light on analysis.

From a technical standpoint, you write well. You make an attempt at answering the question. For those reasons alone, this is a four (out of six).