Please Help Me get into my Dream School!!!

cheese45
Sat, 30 Apr 2011 01:13:08 +0000

Hello everyone,

I am actively trying to make sure i can get into NYU Stern… and mostly ive been on the right Track However i have , as any normal person, messed up from time to time… Please if would like you the college confidential community to help me out by telling my if i still have a chance to get into my dream school and if i do/dont how to improve these chances.

Also please do not be afraid to be harsh, in fact i would rather everyone tell me i had a slight chance of getting in and for me to get in then for everyone to tell me i and a shoe in and for me to get cocky. All in all use your best judgement

Basic information:
Indian
Competitive Public High School
Currently Finishing Junior year

Freshmen Year- started out strong

Honors Geometry- B
Honors Biology - A
Honors History - A
Regular English - A
French 2- B
Computer Programing - A
Wellness and Fitness - A
Computer apps - A
Introduction to business - A

Uw GPA - 3.71
W Gpa- 4.07

Extracurriculars:

FBLA- Regional Competition Global business- 5th place
- Chapter Community Service project: 500$ to Haiti
- Selected to attend State competition as representative from school

Asian Culture Club- Mostly for fun and to learn more about my culture
Ping Pong Club- again mostly for fun
First Robotics Team- I had an interest in engineering

Community Service:

-Various areas - Total amount 70hrs

Sophomore Year- the Big mess up

Ap European History - C 4 on exam
Ap computer Sci - B 3 on exam
Honors chem - B
English 10th - B
Honors Algebra 2 - B
French 3 - C
Gym - A
(Summer Health course - A (non-GPA))

Uw GPA- 2.74 :((((
W GPA- 3.21

Extracurriculars:

FBLA- Regional 3rd place Introduction to bussiness
- States Introduction to bussiness 8th place

Key Club- First year in the school
- First Year member: Chairmen of a committee
- Community service (will be mentioned later)

Debate - Co-founder:
- Vice-president
- Established base-lines

Asian Culture Club: Again mostly for fun and culture
Ping Pong Club- FUn

Community Service:

-Work Here and there - 65 hrs

Key club Community service - 30hrs
Total: 80hrs for sophomore year 165hrs total

Junior year - I was the underdog

AP Biology - A 5 of exam
AP Us history - A 5 on exam
Honors Math analysis - A
English 11th - A
French 4 - B
Honors Physics - A
Marketing - A

Uw GPA- 3.84
W GPA- 4.46

Extracurriculars:

FBLA - Elected Community service lesion( equivalent to the level of power/respect secretary or treasurer has) for upcoming year
- 2nd place Parliamentary procedures regionals
- 5th place Parliamentary Procedures States
- Open event winner (6th place) at States

Key Club- Elected to be Vice-president of Key Club (i love community service)
- Was one of the more prominent members this year that helped Key Club start full throttle
- Many hrs of community service

Debate- I ran for and won the election to be Secretary next year because i will be assuming more responsibility and do not wish to be overwhelmed also their is this very committed underclassmen in my club and i feel that he should experience leadership so i pushed for him to run for vice-pres

Theater- Understudy student Producer
- First show to sell out in 5 years

Community Service:

Summer Camp counselor: 85hrs
Key club: 60hrs
Various works: 30hrs
Won Presidential Service award Silver- national level volunteer award

SO thats where i am as of now

Uw GPA as of now- 3.43
W GPA as of now- 3.913
Class rank as of now- top 20%

Proposed AP classes for next year

AP AB calc:
AP Us Gov:
AP English:
AP Statistics:

total service hrs as of now: 340hrs

positions for next year

FBLA community service lesion
Key Club VP
Debate Secretary
Student producer of musical production

SO whats my shoot 1-10 and what can i do to improve it?