please help me score my SAT essay

isk82live
Thu, 28 Jul 2011 02:19:46 +0000

Need the prompt…

Second sentence of the thesis/intro: What do you mean?
Talking about your thesis in your thesis… really?

I like to make up statistics too. It’s fun. I made up an example and fake statistics on the actual SAT. Got a 10.

Those are some nice DH words.

I’ll get on top your pyramid. No… not really… Maybe. Do you have any pyramids? Are you Egyptian?! If so, do you consider yourself an African American?

just don’t use such cliched phrases in a conclusion. Good conclusions separate the 10s, 11s, 12s -> albeit I usually get lazy and don’t try on them anyways.

Hint - no need to use a thesaurus while writing these. 1 decently long word per paragraph is sufficient.