Please help me score my SAT essay

hahalolk
Wed, 11 Aug 2010 11:20:37 +0000

Your argument is lacking warrant. It’s not clear how the actions of those two people (the evidence) prove your claim that they are heroes. It definitely needs more development, like Bak0rz said. This essay would get an 8/9 in my opinion, but with stronger warrant, it could earn a 10.