Please help me score my SAT essay

hahalolk
Wed, 11 Aug 2010 20:27:05 +0000

^ Because the example “belongs” to GreedIsGood, you should say "I’m following GreedIsGood**'s** example.

Also, a score of 3/12 signifies what is essentially incoherent babble. The essay isn’t fundamentally flawed, just a bit weak.