Please Help Me with my ESSAY! (MIT)

achat
Tue, 26 Oct 2004 11:29:10 +0000

I liked the introduction.

p.s - I also thought of something. By reducing the number of sentences you devote to your efforts and putting more emphasis on other aspects of this, you will come across as someone who does not feel sorry for himself but is willing to move forward from a traumatic experience… not that I think you were feeling sorry for yourself or anything.