Please Help Me with my ESSAY! (MIT)

LSA
Tue, 26 Oct 2004 05:15:02 +0000

Actually, I quite enjoyed it. It was an easy read for me and I think the admissions folks, especially MIT grads who work in the office, will find it interesting. :)

However, I would revise your intro paragraph to make it tie in somehow a bit better and catch the reader’s attention. :)