Please Help Me with my ESSAY! (MIT)

achat
Tue, 26 Oct 2004 08:43:56 +0000

I think this is a unique essay, a great idea. I concur with downtheway, in that you spent too much time describing the process of remembering. You could make it more interesting by describing how the brain remembers, how the process of long term and short term memory works (not too long, though, just a sentence or two). You could also say something about number theory. Why the remembering of pi is a challenge in itself, meaning something about the number pi…this would show your interest in Mathematics (if you are a Math person). Why that drew you in in the first place.
That would make it a more interesting essay.