Please Help With This Sat Essay

Hunt
Mon, 25 Feb 2008 12:32:45 +0000

I agree that you need to clearly answer the question, both in your introduction, and again (reworded) in your conclusion.
Also, don’t use big vocabulary words unless you are sure of what they mean and how they are used. The following words (at least) are used inappropriately in this essay: surmounts, priest (isn’t Dimmesdale a Protestant minister?), sacreligious, unprecedented. Also, make sure that you follow proper sentence structure without run-ons and fragements. Finally, don’t end a sentence with a preposition–you end your whole essay with one.