Please Help With This Sat Essay

tinuviel
Fri, 22 Feb 2008 17:31:31 +0000

I would say the readers would give it a four or a five, depending on the mood they happened to be in. It might not be fantastic for an English class polished proofread essay, but for something written in the 20 minutes allowed it’s pretty well supported.

remember- treat the readers like they’ve got the analytical skills of a human vegetable! Don’t leave them to draw their own conclusions! Your examples are very good but you could be a little less detailed in the summary and spend more words describing how your examples connect to your thesis. A conclusion sentence/paragraph (depending on how much time you have left) can also do wonders for the reader’s impression of your grasp on the question and can bump up a questionable score.