Please please please grade my essay will grade back

Eagle7
Tue, 29 Dec 2009 18:39:27 +0000

Sentence two needs to be where sentence one is. This adjustment will make your thesis quite obvious…As you alluded to, there are grammatical errors here and there, but these can be minimized with practice under real time constraints…after each paragraph, be sure to refer to your original thesis to be sure that you are still on track…your first example was rather vague, which will not help your overall score…Think: Direction, Cohesion, Conclusion…just came up with that. :)

…a few thoughts from a Writing 790er…Enjoy!