Please, please, please read my essay!

<p>Hi guys and gals. A senior here who is starting to write essays. I have one written and am looking for some critiques. </p>

<p>It's for the commonapp, so it's a pretty big one (in terms of importance, not really size). I chose topic of your choice and just kinda wrote about myself in a way that I thought expressed me as a person. I don't want to tell you what it's about cuz I want you to be able to gather that from the essay. In other words, I just want to see if I am making myself clear in the essay.</p>

<p>It's my first draft, so there will be grammatical errors probably. Anyway, does anybody want to help me out, please?</p>

<p>sure, I wouldn't mind reading it... PM me about it.</p>

<p>I'll read it</p>

<p>Sure, I'll read it.</p>

<p>anybody else?</p>

<p>i'll read it</p>

<p>I wouldn't mind, but I'd post my critique up here.</p>


<p>Do you want a parent who has 2 kids in college, one in grad school to read it. If so, I will.</p>

<p>i'll read it</p>

<p>me 2//////////</p>

<p>sure, i will</p>

<p>ummm... sure.... send it, I'll read it</p>

<p>Yeah sure I'll take a look.</p>

<p>I will too if you like</p>

<p>I'll read it, but just to let you know, I'm applying to colleges this year.</p>

<p>yeah sure you can drop me a pm</p>

<p>I ll read it PM plz</p>

<p>i'll give it a look, PM me</p>

<p>If you'd like to send it to me after you edit it after listening to others' comments, I'll be happy to do so.</p>

<p>I'll look at it too!</p>