Please rate my essay.

jkjeremy
Sun, 01 Dec 2013 12:47:21 +0000

BTW, this isn’t my downright opinion. I felt like I had more resources to write about so I chose this side.



The best resource is a good idea. I wish you’d put forth your “downright opinion.”

As it is, this one is a pretty typical four.

You write competently but the essay dances around the question. It feels forced.