Please read my Common App essay (prompt 3)

goonersfan17
Sat, 17 Sep 2016 20:33:29 +0000

Could someone please proofread/provide feedback on my Common App essay? I wrote on the third prompt (challenging a belief). It’s already been through a couple stages of revision, but I’d really appreciate any comments from a few other readers’ perspectives.

Oh, and I’d really prefer to send my essay only to people who’ve already been through the college application process.

If you’d be willing to read it, please PM me or comment here. Thanks so much!