Pointers on my entrance essays?

dsus444
Tue, 13 Mar 2012 13:38:16 +0000

There are small grammatical issues here and there, but I love your response. It’s unique, free of fluff, all that good stuff. You might need just a /little/ tie in to how this relates to college, but even if you didn’t put it in there, I wouldn’t see a problem submitting this as it is.

–Dany.