Potatoes, for a stronger america (help)

bookworm
Thu, 21 Oct 2004 06:02:27 +0000

channel and watch --don’t you mean, then watch?

some words I would leave out, such as fatso, my friends, and 'blows my mind". Your quote from sister, and twice mentioning the thrown Fruit Loops, can be editted. Could be more effective to mention your sister, with more typical interests in TV shows like Powder Puff girls, looked askance at cooking or nature shows. also, “unique interests”

just trying to be helpful; I’ve come to realize how hard these essays can be