Pretentious and Fake?

Whomovedmycheese
Tue, 13 Apr 2010 15:22:15 +0000

Yes…I can see how the rhetoric is overwhelming. It was for me, at least. It didn’t show who you were which I believe is the objective of the essays.
My essay had some corny intro metaphor in the beginning :rolleyes: but I needed a good starter. After that it was very straightforward and very…me. I figured they would either take it or leave it. They took it, thankfully. :p