(pretty) Please Grade my Essay

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Fri, 11 Sep 2015 03:36:30 +0000

Nicconway

Although machines make life efficient and push us to discover new things, they take jobs away from humans and reduce our human interactions on a daily basis. **You need to take a stand one way or the other.

is better a more efficient life and scientific discovery BETTER or WORSE that reduced Human jobs and interactions.

Pick a position and support it.

Also work on the grammar and writing in the passive voice