Read My Essay? (:

<p>After MANY failed attempts, I FINALLY have rough draft that doesn't make me want to hide my head in shame. </p>

<p>I know it still needs a lot of work, so if anyone is willing, I'd love the feedback.</p>

<p>Common app: diversity prompt (ish).</p>

<p>ill try to read it over for you</p>

<p>sure send it to me</p>

<p>i'll do it</p>

<p>I'll read it</p>

<p>ill read it. pm me</p>

<p>ill read it. pm me</p>