Read my essay?

mlennon1017
Sat, 03 Jan 2009 02:44:50 +0000

That isn’t very good. You need to not seem like you are bragging about everything you have done. You also pretty much bash the “upper class” people in your essay. You make them seem like awful people. That will not make many colleges very happy if you continuously try to play the “I’m unfortunate” card.