Read my essay?

fireandrain
Sat, 03 Jan 2009 10:04:38 +0000

tom, you really shouldn’t put your complete college essay online like this. If you wanted feedback, you should ask for readers and them pm or email them your essay.

I think this essay is pretty good. I especially like your last line. Congratulations on making a difference at a difficult high school.

If you plan on submitting this essay to other schools, pm me and I’ll make some suggestions.