Read my UC essay?

sikalex
Thu, 21 Nov 2013 11:56:15 +0000

This is for the first prompt:

“Describe the world you come from — for example, your family, community or school — and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.”

I feel the start of my essay is strong but dies out towards the end, if any could give me advice on how to transition properly that would greatly be appreciated !!