Read my UC prompt 1 response

sherry18
Sat, 30 Nov 2013 02:37:21 +0000

You really need to read the prompt properly and gain perspective. You are not answering the question. It can be tempting to tell admissions your life story but they are asking you about your MAJOR and the work you’ve done. The part about working as a pharmacy clerk - expand on that. How did that cultivate your interest? How have you grown since choosing chemistry as your major? What kind of relevant work have you done? What has your work done for you? What are your goals? EXPAND. Don’t go too much into detail about your family and other things. Focus on the prompt.