Review essay please!!!!!

leslier
Mon, 02 Jan 2012 15:45:43 +0000

I think the second could be very good, with some editing. I tend to agree you might not use the words “paranoia” and “antisocial”–lean on the positive, and how you came through, and focused academically, despite all the very hard stuff. could you give a more specific example of HOW you pushed through in the end? a small event? or did technology offer you another world outside the hard one at home? if not too late i encourage you to revise. best of luck.