SAT Essay - Please grade!

fiona_1
Thu, 05 Jun 2008 12:03:49 +0000

Some queries:
-I believe alltime should have a hyphen
-What’s “looked around”? (Para 1)
-Introvert, not invert

I’d give it a 5. Generally well-written, with a clear structure. The beefs I have are with the introduction (I’d go straight to thesis, your approach is a bit roundabout) and the lack of a conclusion.