SAT Essay---Please Score

econ981
Sun, 03 Feb 2013 19:30:25 +0000

Comments:


I highly doubt that you wrote 454 words in 25 minutes, and you likely couldn’t fit that on the two pages provided.
Good introduction and thesis
Excellent examples and details


Something about this essay doesn’t seem right to me. I am fairly confident that this was not written in 25 minutes; it feels much too polished and it is abnormally long. If you actually produced this during the SAT (and could fit it on two pages) it would be a 6/6.