SAT Writing Blue Book

College99999
Fri, 02 Dec 2011 11:19:59 +0000

I’m not exactly sure what you mean by a ‘topic sentence’, but the beginning of the paragraph you pointed out seems pretty good imo… why would it be wrong?
The errors you pointed are also minor and mostly regarding spelling - a kind that isn’t weighted heavily, so much that it is not even covered on the MC section of the test. Keep in mind that to get a 6 your essay doesn’t have to be perfect; after all, you are only given 25 min and even CB states that essays are intended as ‘first drafts’: they should not be teeming with errors, but some minor mistakes are unlikely to kill you…