Score my essay

waitingforivy
Fri, 26 Nov 2010 13:55:10 +0000

The topic and your examples are good. They could use more analysis, but are specific enough. However, the essay is difficult to read. Some vocabulary, such as impeccable, is used incorrectly. There are many grammer errors and incorrect verb and tense usage problems. You might want to use simpler sentence structure, but with correct grammar. Right now I’d give this essay a 7-8/12