Score my essay

gensis
Fri, 26 Nov 2010 03:17:20 +0000

Since you probably didn’t read my message, I’ll tell you here. This is NOT a 12/12, and will require much more work to bring it up to that level. Your examples are too superficial, because they have almost zero analysis behind them, and they are examples that everyone could think of. If you want a 12, you need an example that can stand out (or several). Your vocabulary is also very basic, and the few hard vocab that you throw in here instead stands out. Don’t throw in random vocab, either fill your essay up with them or ignore it completely. Your conclusion is also very average. It doesn’t make a lasting impression on the reader, and if you want that score, you need to make a lasting, good impression.

10/12 at most. 8-9/12 is my prediction.