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Suleyman95
Thu, 25 Nov 2010 07:04:22 +0000

Topic: Should we spend more time outdoors?

People should spend more time outdoors. Several examples from the social science, medical research, and my own life experience, prove that being outdoors two-three hours a day is crucial to the health and life success.

According to the Social Science Research 2008, modern people are very busy: one has a job, one has a school, and one has obligations. There’re times when people got to work overtime. As an example, let us consider a student prepares for the exam. In this case, a student realizes a momentous importance of this event, and lefts his mundane life behind him. According to this research, students like that one, need to spend more time outdoors because they must have some time when they are in solitary: no books, no problems, no obligations—only fresh air that helps to relax and gain aplomb, confidence under pressure. Therefore, the Social Science Research gives the reasons why we need to spend more time outdoors.

Similarly to the Social Science Research 2008, the Medical one also suggests to spend more time outdoors. But in this case, the medical research was made by doctors and, therefore, gives its reasons from medical approach. As many people know from their Biology classes in the school, the trees are producing oxygen 02 that is crucial to humans’ health because it affects brain’s productivity. Hence, why we need to spend more time outdoors? Because of trees producing oxygen 02; why we need oxygen? Because it positively affects humans’ brain.

My elder brother’s failure during his preparation for final exams in his school exemplifies both researches’ pattern in use. Joseph, my elder brother, was finishing his last year in the school. Like example in Social Science Research, Joseph left his mundane life behind him. He was studying whole day. And finally, there was one practice test to do. So he started doing it, but his every question was wrong. I suggested him to walk round the house. My advice was right. Joseph successfully done his last practice test and aced his school exams. Therefore, this example advice to spend more time outdoors because of reasons presented in both researches.

After careful analysis of Social Science Research 2008, Medical Research, and story from my own life experience, one could see that we should spend more time outdoors, indeed.