Score my essay

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Sun, 26 Dec 2010 17:45:51 +0000

Your attitude is a bit bizarre.



Just a bit?

The first thing that I saw when I started skimming this essay:

the novel 1815 by Jane Austen, where Emma Woodhouse



Really? How could the title have been more obvious? Jesus, if you had an English teacher as the reader on this essay, that person would have the idea that you were a numbskull (that’s putting it lightly, BTW) for the rest of the essay–which isn’t good at all.

Suleyman, I doubt you’ll take my opinion to heart, so I’ll keep it short so as not to waste my time. Grammar and diction errors are found throughout the essay. The only redeeming factor in this essay is a very strong, explicit thesis. Even the high-level vocab words you use seem forced at least half the time. I’d give it a 4. If I were an English professor, I’d give it a 3.