Should i include this things in my essay

loco10
Fri, 11 Feb 2011 18:18:12 +0000

Hey guys Im applying to TCU as a transfer I just wanna make sure that my essay is good.
Im not sure if I should say or include this things;

Should i say that " Neeley School of Business is among the strongest business schools in the US" ? i know its a strong program but im not sure if i should clasify is among the strongest.
That Im interested in minors.
My major is business administration but Im also into music and Im a drummer. Im putting that I would like to join TCUs marching band and the jazz ensemble but Im not even sure that I have a chance of joining these or if I should include this.
That I want to join the American Marketing Association. Im not sure about this one because I dont know what the requirements are to get in or anything else. I just read the description in the website.
That I want to join a fraternity with academic goals? not sure about that one though…
Im international so I know nothing about fraternities and if theyre ALL viewed as a partying gateway or something.

Also, if anybody can read my essay and give me some advice Id really appreciate it