some writing questions-harder ones

MD_Mom_1
Sat, 13 Apr 2013 23:45:51 +0000

Number one: the pronoun reference is not clear. In Asim had cleared it, it isn’t clear what it refers to. You fix it in your mind because you think the it refers to the table.

Number two: I do not understand the sentence and wonder whether you typed it correctly.

Number three: this is a parallelism problem and divisionbyzero is correct about the verb.