Someone read my essay?

gr2l
Fri, 18 Jul 2008 20:50:54 +0000

I don’t think this would be considered the ‘best’ of what I can write…but it’s okay for now. I think it’s just something to me get started for this whole essay writing process and I just don’t think it’s near its full potential so I was wondering if anyone could read this over and help me out a bit…?

Eh and I’m also thinking my beginning and end don’t tie in very well either so any advice would be great. Thanks!