Soo, here's my essay...comments please:)

ddjones007
Tue, 10 Oct 2006 13:52:39 +0000

By the way, smartturtle, I am not a teacher, but I am a professional writer. The essay is not about stylistics or impressive vocabulary. It’s not a writing contest. It is a way to convey an aspect of yourself that the numbers just don’t show. You are very real in yours, which I think is great. Tweak it and they’ll be impressed.