Soo, here's my essay...comments please:)

smartterturtle
Mon, 09 Oct 2006 21:18:47 +0000

oh boy, I thought I was doing well…I actually am a pretty boring person in a lot of respects, so maybe my writing reflects that. I can’t cut one or the other out…I mean, they really are my two passions, but it’s almost impossible to go into depth without going over the word limit. I suppose I could talk about when I emailed the engineering dept. and got a response from one of the professors telling me about the research they do with NASA and how excited I was when I found out…I don’t know…btw, I had both my AP history/model un teacher and my old english teacher read them and they only made minor corrections/suggestions, so perhaps I will have another English teacher read it