The Fabricated Universe : College essay

baboonrancher
Tue, 21 Nov 2006 08:56:21 +0000

I have a quick question on the college essay in the common application part where you get to chose your own topic.
I am part done with an Essay titled :The Fabricated Universe and How I Came To UnderStand It and Like it.

It deals with the way man fabricated the universe by his means of understanding it. I have alluded to the Geillio Satellite, Hubble , the string theory and mathematical constants. Then i have added on the reason why i love science the way it is and my intention in the future to help it. I have included the ‘i like science factor’ in a different way.

I have seen sample college essays from Barnes and Noble and most of them seem simple and straight forward (with few exceptions), is my way of dealing good? or should i just talk about the time i made plastic out of milk?

I will be posting this on other colleges too, so if this is a holistic type of essay please do comment about it.

Thank You