Tips for a 36 on the Essay

leonardo2020
Tue, 13 Oct 2015 18:47:02 +0000

Congrats on the writing score!
And thanks a lot for this post.

Let me paraphrase a few of your points to see if I understood it correctly:
Actually you search for the “flaws” in every provided prospective and don’t completely agree/disagree with any one?
And then you provide new insights to make the theme more complex.

How did you mention the perspectives in your essay? With what kind of sentence?
(…, which states perspective one. / …, which contradicts perspective two.)

Did you support all of the perspectives/your more complex insights with specific examples?