tone of the essay question response

rofikicafe
Wed, 04 Jul 2018 21:35:00 +0000

Some 17 year olds have a very mature set of priorities. My dd is a very deep and profound thinker. She also has an immature side to her. She has written a few essays, and I have two favorites. In both, she comes across as a very compassionate and caring person, but in one, she sounds whimsically childish and in the other, she sounds mature beyond her years. I feel like BOTH are a little risky because of the extremes, but both were written by her and definitely have her “voice”