Trimming down an essay help? -- 684 Words

flyingkitty
Mon, 29 Jul 2013 11:34:41 +0000

Try to reword any sentences using passive voice into active; it usually cuts around one to three words per sentence. If you use a verb + adverb (or adverbial phrase) combo, try picking a verb with a stronger connotation and omitting the adverb. When you look over your writing, ask yourself if the information you include is actually necessary (does it give more insight into you or your situation? or is it just filler details?) or if there’s a way to summarize the info by using fewer words.