UC Essay #2 - Please critique!!!

Leftist
Wed, 24 Nov 2004 16:13:00 +0000

Not bad. The only thing I noticed that wasn’t cool about it is the imbalance in it. You can tell that you realized you were running out of words and tried to end it quickly. In this case I don’t know if that can be helped or not. I’m also applying to a UC. I’m j/w. What are you doing for the 600 word answer?