UC Essay Critique

USCfighton1
Sat, 24 Nov 2012 20:54:42 +0000

Hey guys,

I’m a new member to CC. I’ve used it for a while now to read information and to get questions answered, but I finally cracked down and got an account.

I just finished my essay for the UC Personal Statement #1. Can anyone critique it / give feedback? I’ll PM those interested.

Thanks so much!