UC essay topic-how i almost died...

<p>i just wrote and essay about how my brother almost killed me and my friends in a jump house. im making this out to be a little more dramatic then it really is, i just need someone to read the essay and see if the topic is original and if im making a good point. if you are interested reply to this thread and i will pm the essay to you. </p>

<p>thanks in advance :)</p>

<p>sure i'll take a look at it</p>

<p>I'd like to read it too plz :)</p>

<p>Sure I'll take a look.</p>



<p>You're a douchebag. The kid is looking for some advice. There's no need to be a hater.</p>

<p>Then give him some instead of stalking me. BTW, you're boring.</p>

<p>take a look?</p>

<p>I'll look at it. :)</p>

<p>thanks for defending me westcoast. and btw snugglemonster i should let you know that people who think that everything is boring are pretty boring themselves. oh and also im a "her" not a "him"...and thanks to all the willing readers...this will help a lot =)</p>