UC Personal Statement Critique Wanted

fall2016parent
Thu, 07 Nov 2013 18:43:29 +0000

I agree with @bomerr…you got to go bit more into your ECs, not your interaction with your friend, and not sure how it relates to your CS major either.
[UC Davis : Personal Statement](http://admissions.ucdavis.edu/apply/personal_statement.cfm)