UC Prompt 2, help critique please please!

ReturntheFava
Sun, 06 Nov 2011 09:34:19 +0000

Cathereene, I think this topic could work it’s different and fun. What you might want to do to make it more relevant is give specific details about where you work and volunteer and how your learned values apply to what you do. So, I think you should edit the 2nd paragraph down and expand on the third paragraph and it will give adcom more of what they’re really interested in!