UC transfer personal statement - post, critiques, advice, etc.

ocnative
Sat, 31 May 2014 17:33:58 +0000

You don’t need to fill every sentence with awkward vocabulary, such as “boisterous” or “monosyllabic”. Keep it simple. You want the reader to hear the authenticity of your voice.

music1990 is right. You give more detail to the other characters than you do about yourself. We want to know why this experience is important to you.