UC transfer personal statement - post, critiques, advice, etc.

music1990
Sat, 31 May 2014 14:29:30 +0000

Well I am by no means an authority on personal statements, but I’ll give you the best advice I can. Think about it as a self reflection, using stories to support your reflections. So instead of focusing on what happened to you, focus on your thought process during that experience. Your main goal is to show them who you are, not tell a story. You can of course tell a story, but that should come secondary to your portrayal of yourself. In your story, I feel like I know more about the other characters in your story then you.

Also, think of a characteristic about yourself, and try to emphasize it throughout the essay. Don’t be afraid to just come out and say it, also. For example: “I have always considered myself very persistent when it comes to reaching my goals” (a little bit of a cliche, but you get it). Then talk about an experience that showcases that quality.