UC transfer personal statement - post, critiques, advice, etc.

nowworried
Sat, 31 May 2014 21:55:58 +0000

Kudos for starting so early. I’ll just add on to what everyone else has said and this might be a repetition of what the others said but that just tells you how important it is, right?

You should more explicitly state what you’ve gained from that experience and how you’ve changed throughout your walk.I think that you shouldn’t show so much what was happening around you, but how the villager’s kindness affected you and changed you.

State why you’re proud of this walk.

Ultimately, I suggest that you need to show how you’ve grown out of that experience and how the consequences around you personally/emotionally affected you.