UCF Admissions Essay Review?

ctl987
Sun, 15 Sep 2013 10:27:07 +0000

I think your essay is fine but agree it’s best to not post online. i would suggest you delete the post due to plagiarism concerns and maybe ask for people to review it through private messages instead. I don’t think it’s a cliche topic. You lost your grandpa at a young age and it affected you. Also, I don’t think you sounded too pompous. Selling yourself to a school is part of this process. We had one school recommend my kid not be too humble when he applies for scholarships.