UCF Admissions Essay Review?

Kauai2
Mon, 20 Jan 2014 04:25:07 +0000

Firstly loved that you put your motivation in your essay. It added a that personal touch that will make it stand out.
I do have to say though that you barely touched base on why you want to apply to UCF. I understand that you think you can contribute there, but out of all the universities in the country why study medicine at UCF? I understand your motivation but not in relation to the school you chose. Just an observation, the rest is great.