UF Decision Soon; last minute chances?

CC1479
Tue, 08 Feb 2011 14:40:38 +0000

Also additional information:

I wrote an essay of a treasured experience of mine in which I attended my eldest brother’s UF Pharmacy White Coat Ceremony and heard the speeches given by the various pharmacists and health care workers and how that along with the amount I look up to my brother helped guide my future plans as it was at a time where I began thinking about it. I’m majoring in Biology and plan to seek out a career path related to neurology and possibly neurosurgery.

I unfortunately did not have any compelling upward trend or hook that I could have used but I feel like the essay was well written and formatted.