Violence in essays?

lookingforward
Mon, 13 Sep 2010 14:13:50 +0000

You have to make this shine or it risks being a pity party or a drag. Idea is to NOT fatigue the reader. Can you discuss the culture? Make it really bright/funny and show how you are triumphing in attitude and committment despite the various challenges? Include some locals who influenced you deeply? They want that glow after reading your essay. Ultimately, it depends on where you want to go to school. Any-old-U will be satisfied with any-old-essay. A hotter place will need to see the self-awareness and more. And, not sense your dissatisfaction.