Violence in essays?

lookingforward
Wed, 15 Sep 2010 02:29:43 +0000

I wouldn’t make anyone too queasy. Adcoms have seen it all- they know what life is like in various regions. But, they work hard, read so many essays. Don’t break their momentum with some mental image they can’t shake! Don’t know what you intend, but be careful about mixing your two ideas. Funiest thing ever saw was about a kid’s trip back to the parent’s homeland and how grossed out he was at some volunteer work he was assigned. But it was not on the level of carcasses. In the end, he learned first-hand how what he was doing provided a native alternate energy source- the last thing he had envisioned. Inthe end he had lost his disgust entirely and was really impressed by the ingenuity around him.