Wanna Read My Application Essay?...

PopiEph
Tue, 12 Dec 2006 14:46:35 +0000

i think you tried to get too cute with the truck metaphor and it gets in the way of what it must have been like to go through the divorce and the winter. although you shouldnt have to put out your family s laundry as a ticket to get in, once you bring it up, you can elaborate more on the personal stuff. actually it seemed like it was going to be an im as sturdy as my truck essay, and then it was heading towards terminal illness recovery and finally divorce. i d go B+.