Want to grade my essay?

Subrosian
Fri, 25 Sep 2009 00:34:54 +0000

Take my word with a grain of salt, as I suck at writing essays myself.

Your essay seems to just recite anecdotes and not give much critical thinking/explanation. E.g. your “life of Pi” example just says in the last sentence that he was a hero because he was outspoken, but nothing in your paragraph supports that claim - WHY he would be considered a hero. It simply says that he told his parents his religion.

So I would give your essay a 4/5 simply because of length.