Weight loss a good essay topic?

myscreenname568
Sat, 22 Oct 2016 15:39:48 +0000

@bodangles

I probably worded it wrong, I’m not saying that I want the main idea of my essay to be “I’m amazing because I lost weight”. I’m not saying that’s what I want the adcom to “assume” either. I just want to make sure it communicates what I want it to communicate without getting into the territory of either arrogance or vagueness.