Weight loss a good essay topic?

myscreenname568
Sat, 22 Oct 2016 15:29:33 +0000

@CheddarcheeseMN

I probably wouldn’t mention it in my essay, I just put it in this post to provide context. I know that being overly-technical can be concerning and it can show a lack of authenticity. And I appreciate your advice on broadening my discussion, but I feel like it’s a tightrope to walk on. I don’t want to outright say “I’m so successful/better/more understanding because I lost weight” but at the same time I don’t want to leave all these things to be assumed. Maybe I’ll hint at or imply them, it’s just hard to write an essay about this while at the same time not trying to sound like I’m trying to “stretch” it to fit some pre-conceived idea of what they want to hear.