Weird story, thus weird essay

bjkmom
Tue, 05 Sep 2017 09:48:43 +0000

So many issues.

For starters, it’s been posted for all the world to see for close to 24 hours.

At this point, you can probably assume that it’s no longer yours, that someone else has taken it for themselves.

Go back and read all the warnings about posting your essay.

Then again, maybe not. Because this essay is NOT the essay that’s going to get you into college. It does NOT give the reader any desire to have you on his campus. It does NOT “give them a reason to say yes.”

Your essay is supposed to sell your application. This one does not.

Back to the drawing board.